Is this paragraph properly written?

Answer by Candace Vianna: I pretty much agree with the majority on this one, but here’s another punctuation trick to consider. On  the way to his car, Dan analyzed what the man had said: The  warehouse was  occupied on Wednesdays and Thursdays. But the Buffalo  murder occurred  on a Saturday, and Sarah Johnson was killed…

Before writing a novel, what shall I focus on at the beginning?

Answer by Candace Vianna: In my opinion, it varies. First ask yourself this question. “Why do I want  to a novel?” The answer to that question determines your approach. Are  you writing to generate income? If so you need to make content choices based on market demand.  You can write a great novel about a…